- shapes must connect or disconnect where needed: the hole in the e is lacking, the m has a disjoint middle leg
- symbols should group into words and words into sentences. Your font reads like a chinese calligrapher would: each character is (not) a word.
There was a thread on the subject somewhere on the forum, you should go out and find it.
That said, why not just fix the needed italian in the VGA font (Did you try loading the extended ascii with codepage 850 or parts thereof)
The e is so streched because I have just 8x8pixel to fix the shape, but I understand your point of view
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The difference between cursive and "stampatello" or Roman Type is this there is padding between the chars.
I could fix it but there wasn't the space around the chars to add the graphic symbols required
DavidCooper wrote:An impressive piece of work, although it's visually quite painful. I hate the yellow screen (picture 2), but maybe that's just me - to try to balance the yellow against something you could try a red outline for the box, yellow for the content of the top half and blue text for the content of the lower half (it might not work, but by experimenting in this way I'm sure you can find some way to improve the look of it considerably).
This guide has no color
It is just a plan text file and the booloader types the text file in this way. I could change the default color ^_^ or convert it in a ansi file.
DavidCooper wrote:
On that same screen, where it says "Here you are a small guide." it sounds like an invitation to take part in some kinky role-play where you are asked to pretend to be a girl in uniform. Better wording might be "Here is a list of available commands."
I can't understand this XD sorry ^_^
DavidCooper wrote:
If you want to keep that font, you'll need to provide a switch to an alternative one, or better still, start with something easier to read and offer the fancy one as an alternative. I don't know how you can solve the letter spacing issue, but I agree with the others here that it adds to the reading discomfort.
Ok I will put this font together with the one with the runes XD
DavidCooper wrote:
In pictures 1 and 3 there are rather a lot of long horizontal lines with very short text content between them. It isn't clear what the longest text to appear in them might be or how many additional long thin boxes might need to appear underneath the existing ones, but if the content is always going to be fairly short it might be better to go for short fat boxes with maybe three or four boxes per row.
I can't because I could use more long names and write in them additional data about the profile I'm loading.
DavidCooper wrote:
In pictures 8 and 9 the attempt at a 3D banner heading results in something that looks like a sticker that has come loose and slid out of place) - it simply doesn't work with boxy graphics, unlike your flames which are superb.
This was my first try with colors ^_^ I'll try to fix it
DavidCooper wrote:
Having said all that, don't worry too much about the visuals - keep focused on getting the functionality right first and put some work into making it visually more attractive later on.
It is however important
I will fix all the problems.